Okay, so I've already tried to post this comment, but apparently, LJ is in an eating-comment mood tonight. Hungry thing it is.
Anyway, here goes again:
You did a great job of building Dean's rising worry throughout the story, and I like how you broke up the narrative sections with his dialogue to Sam on the phone. Once again, you've broken the guy and done it beautifully.
On another note, I do remember you telling me that if I didn't have two chapters in my inbox by, I believe, February 1st, I could start whining. Yes? Well, it's almost the 1st my time, which means it probably is the 1st your time, and...that's all I'm going to say about this, missy. *tries to look intimidating* Heh.
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Date: 2007-02-01 12:58 am (UTC)Anyway, here goes again:
You did a great job of building Dean's rising worry throughout the story, and I like how you broke up the narrative sections with his dialogue to Sam on the phone. Once again, you've broken the guy and done it beautifully.
On another note, I do remember you telling me that if I didn't have two chapters in my inbox by, I believe, February 1st, I could start whining. Yes? Well, it's almost the 1st my time, which means it probably is the 1st your time, and...that's all I'm going to say about this, missy. *tries to look intimidating* Heh.