I do think however you should of put in when The Master dies in the doctors arms in there as well... I think the "I forgive you" from the Last of The Timelords would've been a rather fitting ending for your particular story...or also when the doctor went away in the Tardis with the Masters hand... but anyway... I still really like your story... The Master/The Doctor is a way more better pairing then 10/Rose =D
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I do think however you should of put in when The Master dies in the doctors arms in there as well... I think the "I forgive you" from the Last of The Timelords would've been a rather fitting ending for your particular story...or also when the doctor went away in the Tardis with the Masters hand... but anyway... I still really like your story... The Master/The Doctor is a way more better pairing then 10/Rose =D